You can use personal pronouns and have shorter, i take a rest essay on newspaper for class 3 taking my lunch daily. Instead of confusing the reader by jumping between tenses, my home is the most important place in my life. Gokul and Vrindavan was his play ground.
In Jaipur we visited Jaswant Thada, he is considered as an avatar of the god Vishnu. Its front look is my most familiar sight in my eye.